Saturday, 24 October 2026

AI Man ~ an update of an old poem

AI Man

Iron Man   an update of an old poem


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the arrival of the iron man 


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they’ve brought in an iron man

that’s what dad heard the old men say

when he was a child

taking the bread and dripping down

to his grandpa in the tin works


it took two men to throw the tin sheet

over the rollers and the hammers

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but now the rat science has sneaked in

and bitten off one of the men at the

knees that poked through the dungarees 

and brought those knees to unexpected prayers

and angry tears that would never roll further

than the dust 


no further than over the doorstep

no further than a slump into the fireside chair

the shift hooters laughing from the vault doors

of the iron master's ruddy cheeks brandied 

and bred in the west side’s sweet sea air

fed by the sweat in the smoking man hours

whose only collegiate clubs were the pub

the pigeons and lurchers and back gate philosophies 

of the futility of hope


the iron will being annealed in those very tears

quenched in the damp graveside nodding at

another life run its short span

buried in the drab sarcophagus of the village

pinnies and scarves and shinning doorsteps

of pride and injustice polished to a sheen that

history would reflect down the ages of oppression

and pride at what muscles and mind can sustain

through human resolve and the restitution of time


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