Monday, 3 August 2026

something to build on

 something to build on


the copper works

the old folks told of them

as if they had been there

but had not 


the veins in their hands 

as blue as the soot walls 

where the men had certainly been

and clog-hobbled the cobbled roads

between the buildings in ruin now

walls only with sky roofs

that pushed us in


brick doors and windows

of bricks that could be levered out

to within an inch of catastrophe 


our childhood was within that inch


bricks conveyed by laughing hands

with a cunning plan

to build an organised tower

atop of the old quay wall

higher that daring did


sweat contemplation long held

and staid the hand’s itch

to topple the river’s flowing calm

time’s up decided a shared look

and a push is all it took


S P L A S H


like you have never seen

in guilt’s quick look around

until smirk ruled the moment


an instant’s turning decided

footfall to another wall

more bricks quick


for dereliction entered our pantheon

and a dereliction of duty it would have been

to have grown up without having stirred

the few ghosts from which our naughtiness 

no doubt raised a dusty smirk


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